CHAPTER 1 - Introducing Jo Berludi
Jonah Berludi is a 8 year old guy who likes to solve problems. People called him Jo, short for Jonah. He is a private investigator and he works with his dog named Woof. People thinks that Jo is older than his age. Every time that he have a problem to solve, he never failed once.
Jonah Berludi is a 8 year old guy who likes to solve problems. People called him Jo, short for Jonah. He is a private investigator and he works with his dog named Woof. People thinks that Jo is older than his age. Every time that he have a problem to solve, he never failed once.
CHAPTER 2 - The Missing Underwear
He needs to solve a problem which is the 'Missing Underwear'. While Jo is walking to school, his neighbour called him because of their missing underwear. He needs to solve this problem after school. His neighbours were glad to meet him because of his talent to solve problems.
CHAPTER 3 - Gathering Clues
So the school ends, he went to his neighbour name Mr. and Mrs. Pickwick. Jonah is so confused, because no one wants a underwear who wore by old people. So he grab his book to take some notes from what he see around him. The first thing that Jo ask to his neighbours is where are them when the under wear was stolen. Then they said that they are at home all the time. Then Jo went to their neighbours backyard, then he saw some drag marks in the dirt, from the clothesline to the fence. Then he saw a small thread pink lace which he thinks that the thief made his gateway over his neighbours back fence. So Jo called his dog to checkout the smell of the underwear, this technique helps them to notice who is the thief because dogs have a great sense of smelling.
He needs to solve a problem which is the 'Missing Underwear'. While Jo is walking to school, his neighbour called him because of their missing underwear. He needs to solve this problem after school. His neighbours were glad to meet him because of his talent to solve problems.
CHAPTER 3 - Gathering Clues
So the school ends, he went to his neighbour name Mr. and Mrs. Pickwick. Jonah is so confused, because no one wants a underwear who wore by old people. So he grab his book to take some notes from what he see around him. The first thing that Jo ask to his neighbours is where are them when the under wear was stolen. Then they said that they are at home all the time. Then Jo went to their neighbours backyard, then he saw some drag marks in the dirt, from the clothesline to the fence. Then he saw a small thread pink lace which he thinks that the thief made his gateway over his neighbours back fence. So Jo called his dog to checkout the smell of the underwear, this technique helps them to notice who is the thief because dogs have a great sense of smelling.
Hi Myka
ReplyDeleteYou worked hard today to create a well written blog post that recounts what has happened so far in our novel. I can see your own voice coming through and your writing style is right for the purpose. Nice job on this work and creating an easy to understand blog post.
Keep up the great work!
- Miss Birtch