Narrative Writing - The Kangaroo And The Turtle

So I have finish my narrative writing. I just continued it up so that the story is done. If you want to see the another part of my story you can scroll down and have a look at them. If you don't want to have a look, you can also have a look here.

Explanation Part:

Then George can’t handle his temper anymore, and he said, “ Fine! Let’s have a race. The first person who wins, he is going to be the friend of all animals,” Ralph said, “What? Can’t you see that I am a turtle who walks so slow?” George answered back, “ That’s why I’m challenging you. Just meet me at your home at Saturday morning. See ya,” Ralph can’t answer anymore because George ran away. Ralph is so worried, he doesn’t know what to do, he is a slow animal while George is very fast. Solution Part:     It was Saturday morning, George is getting ready for the tournament. He looks so good in his clothes. He talked to his mirror and said, “ How can poor Ralph can beat me? I am George the Kangaroo, the best animal of all,” While Ralph wears an ordinary clothes and having a warm up for the tournament. He talked to his mirror and said, “ I have nothing to wear. But it doesn’t matter, I just want to win the tournament for my friends,”. Suddenly, Ralph hears a noise coming from the outside of the cave, he was curious about it. It was his friends. They brought some clothes for Ralph to wear. Ralph is so happy then Soni talked to Ralph and said, “ I told them that you are going to have a battle with George, and they brought something for you!” Ralph cried in joy. “ I can’t believe that you guys supports me everytime that I need you. Thank you so much,”. Another noise is coming from the outside of the cave, it was George. Then George went to the cave, “ This place is disgusting! By the way, are you ready poor Ralph?” Ralph said “ Yes I am,” then George said in excitement, “ This guys are going to be my friends sooner. What are you waiting for? Let us go outside!”. Now, they are already at the outside of the cave, then the tournament begins. George is so fast, he can’t be seen anymore, while Ralph is so slow. Then he told himself that he is going to win. Many minutes passes, George almost finish the race, but he is so tired, then he saw a place to rest then he went there for a while to rest then sleep. Hours passes George is still sleeping while Ralph saw George sleeping, then he walks slower so that George can’t hear him. Minutes passes, Ralph won the race, then George woked up, he saw that Ralph won. He can’t accept it but he said something to Ralph while crying, “ Please, accept me as your true friend,  I only want to have friends like you!” Then Ralph answered back, “ Its okay, you can be my friend anytime.”. Then Ralph the turtle and George the kangaroo are now friends. They helped each other, they treat each other like a siblings. George totally changed, he is now a friend of many animals and he promised himself to be a good animal forever so that more animals will like him. Whole Story:

  

     Once upon a time, there are two animals named George the kangaroo and Ralph the turtle. They both

live in a forest but they have their own houses there. George has a house that is made up of stone, while Ralph lived in a cave. George doesn’t have many friends at all because he is a proud animal, while Ralph
is a friend of many animals because he is kind. Many animals hated George because of his attitude, then George notice something.

George said “ It seems like many animals hated me, “ then he think of it until night. Then he suddenly saw Ralph walking, and he walked towards to Ralph and said, “ Maybe you are the reason in my problem.

Many animals started to hate me because of you,” then Ralph answered back, “ What are you talking about? I’m not doing anything,”. Then Ralph run away from George.

      In the morning, George went to the cave where Ralph live and hid at the grasses. He is investigating

Ralph to see if Ralph is a bad person, but he can’t see Ralph in the cave. Then Ralph suddenly showed up,

he is with a friend. Then Ralph talked to his friend and said “ George is mad at me. He’s always blaming me

at everything, “ Then his friend Soni said, “ Like what? “, “ Like, no one even likes him. He talked to me last night and blame at me because no one likes him, “ Then George said accidentally, “ NO! It's the truth, you make me look bad in their eyes! “ Ralph answered back “ Can you hear what are you saying?, It’s your problem not mine,”.

Then George can’t handle his temper anymore, and he said, “ Fine! Let’s have a race. The first person who wins, he is going to be the friend of all animals,” Ralph said, “What? Can’t you see that I am a turtle

who walks so slow?” George answered back, “ That’s why I’m challenging you. Just meet me at your home

at Saturday morning. See ya”. Ralph can’t answer anymore because George ran away. Ralph is so worried, he doesn’t know what to do, he is a slow animal while George is very fast.

    It was Saturday morning, George is getting ready for the tournament. He looks so good in his clothes. He talked to his mirror and said, “ How can poor Ralph can beat me? I am George the Kangaroo, the best animal of all,” While Ralph wears an ordinary clothes and having a warm up for the tournament. He talked to his mirror and said, “ I have nothing to wear. But it doesn’t matter, I just want to win the tournament for my friends,”. Suddenly, Ralph hears a noise coming from the outside of the cave, he was curious about it. It was his friends. They brought some clothes for Ralph to wear. Ralph is so happy then Soni talked to Ralph and said, “ I told them that you are going to have a battle with George, and they brought something for you!” Ralph cried in joy. “ I can’t believe that you guys supports me every time that I need you. Thank you so much,”. Another noise is coming from the outside of the cave, it was George. Then George went to the cave, “ This place is disgusting! By the way, are you ready poor Ralph?” Ralph said “ Yes I am,” then George said in excitement, “ This guys are going to be my friends sooner. What are you waiting for? Let us go outside!”. Now, they are already at the outside of the cave, then the tournament begins. George is so fast, he can’t be seen anymore, while Ralph is so slow. Then he told himself that he is going to win. Many minutes passes, George almost finish the race, but he is so tired, then he saw a place to rest then he went
there for a while to rest then sleep. Hours passes George is still sleeping while Ralph saw George sleeping, then he walks slower so that George can’t hear him. Minutes passes, Ralph won the race, then George woke up, he saw that Ralph won. He can’t accept it but he said something to Ralph while crying, “ Please, accept me as your true friend,  I only want to have friends like you!” Then Ralph answered back, “ Its okay, you can be my friend anytime.”     Then Ralph the turtle and George the kangaroo are now friends. They helped each other, they treat each

other like a siblings. George totally changed, he is now a friend of many animals and he promised himself
to be a good animal forever so that more animals will like him.