Dogs Makes Better Pets Than Cats
All over the world, people has a favourite animal. But, do you think that cats and dogs are the most favourite animal all of the time? People argue about this one, they said cats are better than dogs and other said that dogs are better than cats. So I'm going to persuade you that dogs make better pets than cats.
First of all, dogs can help you a lot in your daily living. For just like, dogs are the man's best friend, they help you change your bad mood into good mood whenever you came from work or school. They also helps you guard your house from bad people trying to steal something, because dogs have better sense of smelling than people. But dogs are expensive, they cost a lot of items to buy. It doesn't even matter if dogs are expensive because you're spending your money in such a important thing, in short it is worth it to buy dogs.
Second of all, cats doesn't even helps you a lot. For just like cats eat rats and they make big mess every night. They go out to your neighbours and trying to find a food in the bin which makes the cat stinky and dirty. That also makes you lock up your cat in your house every night which makes you feel sad that you can't make your cat free. Unlike dogs, dogs are very friendly to everyone and doesn't need to lock up every night because they doesn't go to your neighbours every night.
Last, dogs are unforgettable animals. You make memories with them which makes you laugh and cry. But remember, even though dogs are genius, you need to make time with them because they also have a feeling that are the same as people. Because I also have a dog sometimes which makes me also feel this way.
First of all, dogs can help you a lot in your daily living. For just like, dogs are the man's best friend, they help you change your bad mood into good mood whenever you came from work or school. They also helps you guard your house from bad people trying to steal something, because dogs have better sense of smelling than people. But dogs are expensive, they cost a lot of items to buy. It doesn't even matter if dogs are expensive because you're spending your money in such a important thing, in short it is worth it to buy dogs.
Second of all, cats doesn't even helps you a lot. For just like cats eat rats and they make big mess every night. They go out to your neighbours and trying to find a food in the bin which makes the cat stinky and dirty. That also makes you lock up your cat in your house every night which makes you feel sad that you can't make your cat free. Unlike dogs, dogs are very friendly to everyone and doesn't need to lock up every night because they doesn't go to your neighbours every night.
Last, dogs are unforgettable animals. You make memories with them which makes you laugh and cry. But remember, even though dogs are genius, you need to make time with them because they also have a feeling that are the same as people. Because I also have a dog sometimes which makes me also feel this way.
Hi Myka,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your writing work however in some parts it was unclear on what animal your were persuading for or against. Your writing had good punctuation which was easy to read and had some interesting points supporting each animal. Maybe next time you could make it more clear which animal you are supporting.
From Ruby
Hello Myka
ReplyDeleteI am so impressed with how your writing has come along this year and how I can tell that you are elaborating on your ideas and using your own words to express them. This is great.
You organized your ideas clearly and I like how you used sentence starters such as "first", "second" and "lastly" to help you do this.
Keep up the great work!
- Miss Birtch